Do you really want your children to get paid to go to school?
I'm going to tell you why I disagree and agree that kids should and should not get paid to go to school.
First of all I think that when kids go to school they would just go for the money and not go for all the education that they could get.
Did you know that without kids going to school the school wouldn’t be operating.
Reasons why kids should go to school:
Kids would pay way more attention when they do their work.
Kids would like school a lot more, When kids go to school they would be more happier
Reasons why they shouldn’t:
Once they start getting the money it would be hard for them to stop.
It encourages them to overwork.
It encourages cheating and lying.
In conclusion I strongly disagree that kids shouldn’t get paid to go to school because if they did they would spend it all in one place and all in one day.
By Sophia.
In Room 22 we have been doing persuasive writing. We got to choose out of "should we cut down trees to build a t new theme park?" or we could choose "children should get paid to go to school". I chose should kids get paid to go to school. Hope you like my blog post about should kids get paid to go to school.
Hi Sophia,
ReplyDeleteI strongly agree with you because kids will probably lie, cheat, take other kids money and fight over the money. Next time just remember to add fulls stops.
-Caitlin
Mōrena Sophia,
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting piece of writing, you have structured it really well! I like that have shared both opinions of why kids should and shouldn't go to school. Next time, you could ask other people in the school what their view is and add their opinions into your writing. Well done!
Miss Ribotton